I was blown away by this. The attention to detail was wonderful. I didn't want it to end. Keep writing!

o, nice. the whole dream thing was a nice touch. this is good as well :'D

That was a nice change, usually it's the male that does the seducing.

I love your use of vivid imagery, the scene held the brightness and color saturation of dreams.the twist at the end was also nice;you are a talented writer.

Short but good. I enjoyed reading this. At one point you have the word "beacons" instead of "beckons." I'm not sure if that's on purpose or not, but it didn't seem correct to me. Otherwise, I have to say that this story was amazing. Keep up the good work.

I liked it and have nothing to say but VERY VERY good.

Beautiful! Brava!