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| Ninavs 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseOMG! I loved it! |
| Hopelessly Clueless 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHa! I love the ending when Gregory and 'her' caught them! I love it how she calls him 'Sir Lancelot' it's well cute! I love this one-shot! :D |
| crushingpain 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abusehey this was awesome :) lance - being a virgin!? that came as a surprise :D col story! |
| sprite! 2007-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abusejust wanted to say that i thought this was really cute and that i love all your one-shots! (: although if this was any indication of your dreams, then... gosh, what sort of dreams DO you have? ahahaha. just kidding. |
| naningxoxo 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseoh my... i hadn't planned on reading any fictionpress stories until i became less busy... but than i saw this story and i was like shucks, when was the last time someone wrote a story along that plot? In like a year dangit. that's why i read it, and I'm glad i did cuz it was awesome. altho i'm a bit against sex, alcohol, and all that jazz, i am NOT against humor, awesome storyline, and incest... stake me through the heart for my interests but whatever. anyway, awesome job and i hope you have more spontaneous dreams like these! |
| cherrystraw 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abusegood story! i hope you keep writing. |
| ThatAussieGirl 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseloved it. loved Gewns character. loved Lances character. loved what you did with the story. just generally loved it. |
| NomadicWriter 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved this, and although you arent writing anymore it would be interesting to find out what happened with their families etc. i think that it has great potential for more. |
| Megan Christine 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseI pretty much liked it, but Gwyneth seems like too much of a ** for my taste. Great writing though. |
| Campiee 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was hilarious! Thank you. |
| sweetz123 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseoh my god! that has got to be the funniest fluffiest thing ive ev er read and I loved every word, letter and character in it. Great job! |
| anon 2007-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL, that's all i have to say.. and great one shot by the way |
| beingmyself 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the characters and the development of Gwen. It was en enjoyable read. |
| Cleopatra IV 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI really think this has the potential to be if not a full story than at least another 2 or 3 more chapters. You sort of left it hanging here and I think it would be awesome if you finished it up and added another couple chapters. I must admit i'm being a tad bit selfish simply because I want you to write more so i can find out what happends and because i really enjoy reading it. So good job and I hope you'll consider writing more! |
| ess3sandra 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abusei loved how you made the different parts separeted with qoutes, NICE!! and what a hot story, we, well done girlie! |