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| Kissing Concrete 2007-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting ideas, and i really liked how raw it was. the words almost seemed to be in a complete random order (even though i know they arent) and it had a very fresh tone to it. i like the rhyming too. i can't rhyme, so i always admire people who can. good job. |
| Carmel March 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseSimply amazing. It was personal, yet I could definitely relate. You got a real talent here. Good job :) ~carm~ |
| under the influence 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abuseGosh I've been there...very good :) |
| Frosted Midnight 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI know what you mean, this expresses your feeligs really well |
| CarlyJo 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. Veryy good. |