interesting ideas, and i really liked how raw it was. the words almost seemed to be in a complete random order (even though i know they arent) and it had a very fresh tone to it. i like the rhyming too. i can't rhyme, so i always admire people who can. good job.

Simply amazing. It was personal, yet I could definitely relate. You got a real talent here. Good job :)

~carm~

Gosh I've been there...very good :)

I know what you mean, this expresses your feeligs really well

Awesome. Veryy good.