I love this one, too! It embodied a semblance of hope and love. It clearly presents to us the great power of true love: it withstands any form of struggle and remains intact at the end of the day. =)

You already know this, but great job!
Usually, I'm not a big fan of rhyming but you seem to be able to pull it off in this one.
Good use of imagery, but I still like your wedding one better. =]

I like the fact that you ended it with hope. You summed up how the 4 seasons are like life. May you continue with your writting. And if still possible improve.