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| Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-07 ch 1,  | abuseThe imagery is just beautiful in this. It reminds me of a girl that I went to high school with who died in a crash. |
| The Cowardly Lion 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseThere's emotion in this I can probably barely begin to understand. I love the last 2 lines. It makes the damage (death?) seem so much prettier. Yet so much more painful. |
| Crossing the Rubicon 2007-05-23 ch 1, | abuseAn earlier reviewer is right. The glitter line is great. I also love the line "And it was raining too hard to go forty." |
| do the whirlwind 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI really, really like this. Reminds me of Poe's (a great singer) Hey Pretty ( The end is perfect. |
| cocaine and cherries 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abusei like the tension and almost lightheartedness carried through out this. glitter. we all love it. nicely done. |