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| White Rose Blossom 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseAhh, cute ^_^ Loved it! -Aria |
| x3life 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseaww i loved it!! it had so many.. i guess layers to this story. with the whole she loves him. hes her brothers best friend. they had a thing in their childhood but then she goes and "hates" him in high school. and they they go to the same college. and she wants to forget him cuz she doesnt think she has a chance, while hes trying to get to her... with they help of a guy that likes her. haha. it was really great and fun to read!! |
| Pretty Girls Make Graves 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseRereading this one shots and realizing I never commented makes me sad so I'll have to keep commenting. Anyway. *warm fuzzies* |
| phelps112 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abusefunny, very nice. |
| ree 2007-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abusea great story from a great writer. |
| RedBerries 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseI'm not really sre about this, it started well, but then I'm not sure if you hit the cliche a little too hard with the tight clothes and getting drunk business. |
| dotcult 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseaw but "insert foot" was so GOD! maybe it'll hit you again. i loved this. some really good lines. still doesn't make up for quitting insert foot, though. |
| Lady Katreina 2007-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseAHH! Yeah! Now that is classic good ending material right there! |
| BrownEyedBeauty 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abusethis is a wonderful one-shot. funny, amusing, and interesting. it makes a lot of sense, and it's realistic. great work! = D |
| Schlotta Whaley 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abusei like this story, it's really believeable. |
| crazyhelga 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this little story. It's totally believable! Ah... the good old days of frat parties... I wish my first frat party was like that, though. I was 16 and I ran into my then 18 year old brother's friend Josh and he didn't even notice that I was alive, let alone right in front of him, but he sure noticed my cousin... Anyway, keep up the great work. Later! Stacey ~ Crazyhelga |
| Kailum 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. Nice. I enjoyed the whole backstory - it was cute |
| multiples of six 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseHaha! I like this. The dialogue near the end was so funny/cute. I can't believe this Booth guy was in on it though. Anyway-- great story! =) |
| Trmpetplaya1 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseGood one-shot :) I feel like I just watched someone grow up. I like how the ending ended (that sounds weird). But yeah, I feel like this take on romance is a lot more down-to-earth than some of the others out there. It's a happy ending, but not like overly happy. And I like not knowing what happens next. (In a strangely masochist way towards my poor inner hopeless romantic). Loved it! :) |
| Kiara Asukara 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was amazingly adorable. I think this actually made my extremely ** day a great deal better! :) I love reading cute one-shots like this. It gives me hope that not all guys are **. So thank you. :) Looking forward to more of your writing! ~Kaitlin |