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| Perdix 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseReally liked the open end. |
| Christybell 2007-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh, i think the new rhyme scheme really works. Amazing as always Favourite line: "but they all looked so surprised! something bitter something blue" And: "hush, dear, everyone always said – dropping names and guards and gazes" I HELPED WITH THAT ONE! YAY! I was thinking about how you'd use the three, and i thought you'd do something like this. Great minds think alike =D |