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Perdix
2007-06-10
ch 1,
abuseReally liked the open end.
Christybell
2007-04-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh, i think the new rhyme scheme really works. Amazing as always
Favourite line: "but they all looked so surprised! something bitter something blue"
And: "hush, dear, everyone always said – dropping names and guards and gazes" I HELPED WITH THAT ONE! YAY!
I was thinking about how you'd use the three, and i thought you'd do something like this. Great minds think alike =D
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