Awesome!! What happened to the satire of yourself?? When I tried to read it, it didn't exist.

I know this sounds really weird, but it was cute.
I liked it. I enjoyed how you wrote it, context
wise. You learn alot about the people and
society from just a small chapter. Nice
Characterization. :]

Ps. I really enjoyed your title. It doesn`t
make sense, but it`s interesting.

- Devouring Daisies

o, chilling! it's kinda dark and sweet. wonderful ending! "The skin is burned and the ashes used for makeup."- that line made me cringe.

I don't think Mr. Joseph liked her very well. Of course, I wonder what happened to the animals to start making soap out of people. She'll have to kill Mr. Mengles replacement.
Good story.

~SirScott