Okay, I've only had spanish 1...so I've really got no idea what you're saying. The title is "who are we?", verdad? Anyways, although I can say nothing about the poem itself...wait, isn't "reloj" like a clock or something? Well, anyways, I think it's awesome to hear of someone writing in two languages. I can't imagine writing anything sensible in Spanish. Wonderful job! (whatever it means...)