|Reviews for The Right of Passage|
| Bogglewharf 6/25/11 . chapter 6
yes, i agree, it does sound kind of cool put together like that...
what, no more poems? oh well.
| Bogglewharf 6/25/11 . chapter 4
You're right; room for improvement:
Still, it was a lot better than anything I could write.
| Bogglewharf 6/25/11 . chapter 2
You know how good you are; no praise necessary! But still... Yes, again, you should be paid for what you write... o.O
I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks you're talented.
| Bogglewharf 6/25/11 . chapter 1
Awww, I loved it! Very deep, and one of the best poems I've read (not that I read very many poems, but still)...
Thanks for posting this; it's absolutely wonderful.
| Qzie 12/3/07 . chapter 1
That was awesome.
"Science answers long-standing questions
The magic is gone now"
That was probably my favorite part. It also reminded me of this episode of House, how the patient was a magician and he wouldn't reveal his secrets, which frustrated House, because he wants the explanation to everything... anyways...
I really, REALLY liked this piece. :)
| TheSkyIsGreen 5/26/07 . chapter 1
Oh, sad. What a deep, dark poem. And those "-" things, were they used to indicate stanzas?
Anyways, I really liked it. It made me feel so sad, and the ending note was so happy and sad at the same time - bittersweet.
[Hopes contain things wishes never could.] Whoa...
[Why live if all I'm going to do is die?] Ditto. Cool!