yes, i agree, it does sound kind of cool put together like that...

what, no more poems? oh well.

)

You're right; room for improvement:

Still, it was a lot better than anything I could write.

You know how good you are; no praise necessary! But still... Yes, again, you should be paid for what you write... o.O

I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks you're talented.

Awww, I loved it! Very deep, and one of the best poems I've read (not that I read very many poems, but still)...

Thanks for posting this; it's absolutely wonderful.

That was awesome.

"Science answers long-standing questions

Ruins mysteries

The magic is gone now"

That was probably my favorite part. It also reminded me of this episode of House, how the patient was a magician and he wouldn't reveal his secrets, which frustrated House, because he wants the explanation to everything... anyways...

I really, REALLY liked this piece. :)

Oh, sad. What a deep, dark poem. And those "-" things, were they used to indicate stanzas?

Anyways, I really liked it. It made me feel so sad, and the ending note was so happy and sad at the same time - bittersweet.

[Hopes contain things wishes never could.] Whoa...

[Why live if all I'm going to do is die?] Ditto. Cool!