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cami611 2008-04-06 . chapter 1
This is awesome. I'm serious when I say that I agree one-hundred percent with everything that you said with this. I'm part of this generation that is coming up soon, and I can't wait to until we take over and are allowed to make a change and can leave our racist parents and grandparents to look on what they could have done to make the world better, and see how far they've had their heads stuck up their a$$es all their lives. I'm going to look through your other works and I hope that there are more works like this that I can so whole heartedly agree with and easily relate to.
TheQuestionable 2007-05-05 . chapter 1
Beautifully captured. the last three lines really finished if off well. If only we didn't have so many foolish leaders that would drive a nation into hell as long as they have something they and their next generation can live upon. That sounds like the fake american dream to me. The one we've been living in ever since it was put onto paper.

The concept it amazing, but we are too immature to graps it.
groovacious 2007-04-25 . chapter 1
I like it and I like how you pointed out that when we're killing the Earth, we're actually killing ourselves. Do you know that in the end, the Earth will always win? The Earth can always reform itself, it's just us. If we continue on this path of destruction, we kill ourselves off, our human race. Very nice letter.
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