So very sweet, and very nice writing, too :)

That was such a beautiful story! I loved the feeling the story had! Excellent work!

Aww, it's just so sweet and fluffy.

Swweet! I wish i had done that, but the lovely/stupid/dumb girl i like isn't that cute as Lea...*sighs*

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Love your story, it was kinda too short; but i guess thats' okay?

Very cute and very well written! This subject isn't written about a lot and you did a very nice job doing so!

this plot is great. i love it. but you switched from past tense to present tense in almost every paragraph..which is easily fixed.

This is good! I like it!

Somehow... this story just hits a little too close to home. Your grammar's great though.