...good poem. *tear* DA**IT! gah. All this guilt all at once. All i can say is I'm sorry.

interesting poem... just some advice, i would make your vocabulary stronger- i know that for me, stronger vocab makes my poems a lot better...just a suggestion...

Really wonderful poem. I feel like this at times, too, so I can relate. Good work. :D

♥ Ryuuka

Incredible, I never expected it to end like that but I really loved it!

Aw, maams, I used to feel like this sho much...But now, I think that I feel like one of the people that force the happiness upon those who want to show their tears...And I hate myself for that...I hated having to show only one side of me, and now I'm the one pushing others for that...
P.S. U really think Stuart's too good for her?

great job! its very true, and it works well.
(and no, its not mean)
love it!