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A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-11-20 . chapter 1
she seriously thought he had her soul? wow
SunsetRainbow 2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Aw that was so funny and cute! :D
I liked it!
MagnificentMarvelousMe 2009-10-10 . chapter 1
wow!! that was really really good!
charm en route 2009-03-21 . chapter 1
Aw, that was incredibly sweet and cute. Full of fluff, but that's just fine. [:

Anyway, I noticed a couple of typos or whatever, and I figured you wouldn't mind if I pointed them out. Right? Anyway...

"his fey features looked more dangerous that beautiful" 'that' ought to be 'than'

“You’re drawing, of course.” I think you mean for it to be 'your' drawing.

"as I didn’t pay much attention to boy." 'boy' should be plural.

"He wore the school’s vest over his short" 'shirt' [:
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-03-08 . chapter 1
She really thought he had her soul...ha! This was just so cute and adorable. You did a great job! :)
Jade Q. Dean 2009-03-02 . chapter 1
Aww, really cute and original! I really enjoyed it, haha ^^ Hmm, a few typos though ^^ Nothing bad really.
Soggie. 2009-02-14 . chapter 1
How sweet~! I actually loved this story! It seems like it would be a good series!
Sweetly Sarcastic 2009-01-10 . chapter 1
she has about no common sense and is rather a hypochondriac, but this was cute! well done
bluetinkerbell 2009-01-02 . chapter 1
I love Harry Potter and I adore this world that you've created. It's sweet and its fun.

Plus, loving the way your characters react to situations :D

One fic left and I totally feel like a stalker. I mean, I'm dropping notes (reviews...same thing) to you after I visit something of yours!
mo 2009-01-02 . chapter 1
great story
boltfromtheblue101 2008-12-06 . chapter 1
That was so cute! And hilarious. I loved the whole thing, from start to finish. I heard an unsaid, endearing "silly" after he said, "Because I like you." It made me smile. And I absolutely loved Jane's character. It's really sweet to me when someone of high school age (or even college age) has maintained their innocence enough to blush when kissed, or even to talk to a boy! It just made her all the more lovable to me. I LOVED this one-shot. There aren't enough words to describe how much I loved it. Very, very nice work.
Ravina 2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Well written, and very sweet!

- Rebekah
phoenix_rise 2008-11-16 . chapter 1
I loved it, short, funny and original! The "stealing the soul" idea was really great too, I loved that =D
Green Eyed Angel 2008-10-19 . chapter 1
Wow, I love it. Makes me think of Harry Potter, but more romantic and the stuff I like. I would say more, but I don't have much time. Thank you! Favorited.
Sungirl92 2008-10-18 . chapter 1
Ah I love this story :D
Its really sweet and funny in a cute way
Bless Connor =P
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