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| Joe Skittles 2008-06-25 ch 28, anon. | abuseI have to say this story was interesting and caught my attention when I first read the summary. I have been reading a lot of mushy crap lately and had just decided to forgo it for the time being and move to a new genera, when I saw your summary I just had to read the story. It doesn't often happen that a story changes my mind to read even more of that genera. Shelby has been a well developed character for the start. I am also impressed with the amount of personality many of the side characters have; I know it is often difficult to portray a personality without seeming to focus on that character more than you really want to. Really, the only thing I can say about character development, other than what I already have, is that I personally would have have enjoyed reading a bit more on Chris's history. The way you wrote this it comes across more that he's a side character than the main character I assume you meant him to be. Over all, a wonderful story, and one I would recommend to anyone. |
| mariahxpapaya 2008-06-24 ch 28, | abuseoh my goodness! i love this story very much! its so unique, if i only i could of read it sooner ! wow. haha, this story kind of reminds me of that series, jon and kate plus 8 hahaa! omg, thats all i can say. i really really love this story ! xD |
| October 2008-06-16 ch 28, anon. | abuseI have to admit i didn't have much hope for this story when i first started reading it. I thought it was going to turn into one of those horribly cliche romance stories. im acctually happy to say i was wrong. this story is in no way ordinary and i think one day i will be seeing your name on book covers. This story was truly amazing. Thanks October |
| AMM3485 2008-06-10 ch 28, | abuseI absolutely love this story! I KNEW that was what Justin was up to it just made sense lol. GREAT JOB! I wish we could have seen the whole essay. |
| mythweav.r 2008-05-30 ch 8, anon. | abuseI don't really think you have too many characters simply because you have dealt with them well so far. You have provided enough details/background for each character and have mainly focused on the protagonist and other key characters. It's also not like you flooded us with all those information in one go. The story (with the sextuplets) have its own charm so I think you're doing fine :) |
| mythweav.r 2008-05-30 ch 2, anon. | abusethat's like going "sh*t! sh*t! sh*t!" hahaha |
| mythweav.r 2008-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuse*LAUGHS!* fantastic opening chapter!! I'm definitely flipping to the next page.. |
| claireponcherrii 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuselol poor guy |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-05-23 ch 28, | abusehaha You're a great writer and I love all the charcaters! xx |
| mylifeismine 2008-05-08 ch 28, | abuseAw, that was really good! Keep it up! |
| PrincessNancy 2008-05-03 ch 28, | abuseYou have no idea how much I have been laughing reading this... REally. Man, it was tres awesome. I heart Christian. lol Are you sure there isn't a Christian fan club yet? I'd sure be a part of it! And I understand how Shelby feels, I sorta am like her, minus the looking good in anything part. Also, Justin maybe justified in a teennyy bit way for doing that project. He DID help Shelby. Aww, waiting for the payback, I sure am! Looking forwards to reading other stories by you! |
| lilhyperaznwithabigheart 2008-04-25 ch 28, | abuseOMG! this story was absolutly fantastic! u really should do a sequel, and im sure tat sequel would end up being great just like this one. im sure it could end up being a bestseller too! i think u might want to try becoming a writer wen u grow up. u hve the talents for it. i could tell just by reading this one story! anyways, GREAT JOB! ^-^ |
| Ambergirl1029 2008-04-24 ch 17, | abusegood so far |
| lilhyperaznwithabigheart 2008-04-24 ch 15, | abusesure...it'll be interesting having stories on the other sixtuplets! ^-^ |
| lilhyperaznwithabigheart 2008-04-24 ch 8, | abusesorry tat i didnt review til like the eighth chapter...this story is so addicting! i just wanted to keep on reading so badly! lols i think the idea of sextupets is great, tat does seem kind of hard to keep track of though. lols but im sure its nothing u cant handle! ^-^ |