so you don't want to be with this person? O

did you just break up? i don't think i've ever read something so poignant. i hope everything's ok for you. great poetry may sometimes come from great suffering, but you shouldn't have to be THIS sad. cheer up, gal!

krystelvampire

a-ma-zing. This was so good. The way you wrote, not only can it be based on love but also for many occasions. Most people these days lie to themselves about who they really are and you hit the nail on the head when you wrote this, good job.

-Twilight Wolf