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| mangahottie740 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseI liked that poem a lot. It was one of my favorites by you. I actually wrote a chapter to one of my fanfictions sort of like that, about someone wanting to escape a dark void. I liked that a lot. You are very talented! Mangahottie740 |
| J.M. Baldwin 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI Think I like this so much cause it is an emotion many people feel...but don't really know how to explain, however you did it... you explained it in the best way i have ever heard. good job! |
| Edensong 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseYes! I'll rescue you! *Grins* Writing's how I deal with depression too. We poetry crowd have interesting medical histories. Diseased, drowning, crying out in silence... you've captured pretty much every aspect. |
| silentscreamer07 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuse'ello there Blah! (haven't called ya that in awhile) and how are you doing? I'm glad to see you've posted yet again! You must continue to get over writers block...and keep on writing! This came out really good too. I think everyone can relate to this on one level or another. We all have times in life that we're more down then others..and feel like we're about to give up. And I think you described that feeling pretty good. It's like we don't know where to turn, so all we have left to do, is wonder if there will be anyone out there to sort of reach their hand out to us, and help us out of the darkness...and usually that person comes around one time or another. That's why its nice to have friends, eh? Ya know you can always talk to us about anything ^_^ I'm glad though you don't get like that anymore..^_^ That is good! Anyways, I liked this alot..keep up the great work as usual! And hope you post something soon! buhbyes! talk to you later ~Blah Blah~ |
| Completely Incomplete 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseVery good. I myself suffer from depression and this is actually very near accurate. The feeling of drowning is a bit of an over used metaphor, but there really is no other way to describe it. It really does feel like your drowning. No matter how hard you try to swin, it seems there is always something pulling you down. Very good. Keep up the good work. ~Nyght |