*swoon* your writing is so unique. you can practically *hear* the ocean, or *taste* the sweet tea. you have a seriously engaging style. :)

Peace.

I can't believe this hasn't been reviewed yet. I feel this is your best poem, personally. To pick out some favorite lines...

"the unbroken blue of infinite clarity"
"cliched tears"
"April never asks"

As far as criticism goes, I guess I would delete that entire first stanza. I don't feel it has the power that the other stanzas have and is unnecessary, but that's just me. Wonderful job!