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| Bandits Sonado 2007-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseHold out your hand and I'll take it... I know i've failed... I'm not done trying... ~Rhea. |
| ShadowFane 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseSad...Very sad...Regret is like a shadow; it advances on us until we're choking on the darkness of the past...It really sucks, huh? Great poem, though. You really are an amazing writer. SF |
| yookahrr 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseSometimes the truest feelings come out in short bursts that you just need to capture. It shows a sense of feeling i can relate to. I like it. |