Wow. I liked the meeting of the new neighbors, Joe is so not so subtle. Wonder what will happen next. Please update soon!

Loved this first chapter. Joe and Schroder make me laugh. I like this story so far.

When he says 'have', does he mean obsessively keep her, or he wants her as his girlfriend? And when Eleana says 'greasy', do you mean she thinks he looks like a pervert, or he really has greasy skin, or he looks like a greaser?

I'm liking this story so far though unfortunately I can't really say much else because 2 chapters isn't really enough. Therefore, more chapters would be great! I seriously would like find out more!

gulistanlik

haha, sugar cookies! i hate that "new girl" cliche, too...

WOAH - Joe needs to slow down a little. It's sort of creepy - he sounds REALLY creepy! Keep your doors locked...

I can see this is going to get a little dangerous...?

Fantasmically written, of course; as if I expected anything less, sugah!

~ARS

Ana, I honestly don't know how you can say anything wonderful about me.

You're **' amazing, chick. Like, seriously? I love how you can instigate laughter one minute with Schroder (a fantabulously cute name, by the way; reminds me of Schroyer!) and Joe, the next minute having me emit a gasp from the hallow of my esophagus with Lindsay's telltale about her akward dinner. You're incredible, Ana. Simply put.

Please tell a sistah there's another chapte after this one?


~ARS