More please, i really like this. I want to know whats going to happen. ^-^

Hello again. This is a very nice story. I haven't read your fanfics yet. I have some stories here as well. I hope to be hearing from you.

I'm surprised to not see reviews on here... maybe people are emailing you? Anyway, here's my two cents!

I think it's an interesting story. It's too bad it's not the full version of the first chapter, it would be nice to get an idea of what the whole book will be like rather than just the main plot. But I think you'll turn it into a wonderful story, just like your others! Keep up the good work!