this story is one of the best you've ever written. you simply *MUST* (yes, asterix and capitals) write another chapter. *MUST!* if you do not, i shall perster you for days with no end. that, and go on a Jacob rant. Muhahahahaha!
WRITE MORE!

This is a really interesting idea. Too bad you didn't have more words! LOL. It's definitely worth coming back to.