I really like where you're going with this...are you sure you haven't abandoned it, because you haven't updated in a while, which is depressing, because it's got a very good plot line so far.

I really, really hope that you would update already...

I so love your story!

Eek, I love it!! I think your writing improved a lot as you continued. I actually found myself screaming at the computer a couple of times (for reasons that I cannot really fathom... but probably because I'm just overly hyperactive). You know, I used to despise stories with celebrities in them. Most of them I read totally annoyed me, but Girl for Hire is one of the ones I really enjoyed. Good job :)
Hope you update soon!

I love this story - I admit I've seen the formula a lot before in summaries but it's the first I've read and I'm glad I missed all the cliché ones! I think what makes it really original is the characterisation, because Evian and Natanael are both really complex and not stereotyped at all.

The only thing that made me screw up my face was looking at your site and realising that you imagine him as Cristiano Ronaldo whose appeal I just don't see... but that's a matter of taste XD

Anyway, I really hope you update soon because this is really interesting :)

can't wait for the next chapter..:)

I've read the whole story but forgot to comment :( this story is amazing! :D Keep going *Heart* please? :D

Whoa Whoa Whoa.
THIS IS WHERE YOU LEFT IT?! HOW COULD YOU?!
And the last time you updated was a million years ago (exaggeration)!
Please update soon, this is the ultimate cliff-hanger. ULTIMATE.

I love how this is turning out! Please update soon! You have written an amazing story!! :D

oh. my. god.

ohmy-

i like this story very much, its very funny.

i hope you update sooner because i would like to keep reading...

~smurf~

please finish this story, it's great! and if not...please don't abandon it with such a big cliffie!

menno, i knew an evil cliffhanger would come. >.< and it doesn't look like you are a very regular updater either.

that is really too bad cuz so far the fic has been very entertaining (even though I read a similar plot before) and your main charas very interesting due to there different backgrounds.

how do you manage with the Portuguese? do you speak it or look it up in a dictionary?

hope you'll continue to write on this story.

That was really mean of you to end it like that. I hope you realize that ;)

I like how Natanael has changed throughout the course of this story, because if he was hot before, he's way hotter now that he actually, you know, cares.

I really don't like Evy right now. Because she's being completely stupid. =( Hopefully Natanael will get some sense into her.

I hope you update soon!

-Othello, from the Review Marathon (link on profile)

eff...update the stupid story for god's sake.

also i think evian should tone down the crying. i mean she does it like every chapter. how bad could her life possibly be? she gets paid to do practically nothing at all.

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The story is soo gd! plzz update soon *_-