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| Teegan Lee 2008-07-20 ch 11, anon. | abusereally good cant wait for the next update |
| Dipped in Blue 2008-07-16 ch 11,  | abuseLOVE this story : ) Update soon... |
| BurntSky 2008-07-16 ch 11, | abusewow! you're very good. and I sympathize with Rainy for being intimidated -sigh- but then again she shouldn't have gotten the makeover even if it does make her look beautiful.. Natanael won't like that. I take it he didn't really spend all his time with Jennifer did he? Please say no.. Rainy really should have let him explain even if she was hurt, even though she didn't realize, but then again if he did we wouldn't have a story would we? xP anywayz, great characters! even if the story is teensy bit cliche its very well done. thanks so much for uploading and update soon please!! |
| sketchingaCYNiC 2008-07-14 ch 11, | abusedamn, damn, damn! i LOVE this story. it's so intriguing! i can't stop reading it! argh! i can't believe where you left it off. everything about this story is just so damn un-cliche that it makes me mad! haha. i mean, the basic plot is there: girl gets roped in with famous celebrity and has to "bare the suffering" of said cold-hearted dude. but then you throw in like, everything else and it's so awesome and, ahh! i don't know how to describe it. amazing. i love this story. i checked your site for the story, too, and DAMN DO YOU MAKE SOME SWEET GRAPHICS. i hope you don't mind if i add you on facebook. you're my new favorite person in the world. i mean, wow. you have mad skills at writing. |
| ohthevoices 2008-07-09 ch 11, | abuseI really hope you update this soon, because you've got me hooked (though, knowing how mean and evil college can be, I understand if you can't). I love how Evy isn't perfect like a lot of the romance heroines (or even just heroines in general); she's very real and easy to relate to. And, having my own share of self-esteem/assertiveness issues, it's nice to see someone I can actually relate to for once. |
| jojo1993 2008-07-09 ch 11, anon. | abuseOMG this story is so good im so glad that i found it :D PLEASE update! oh, and i really hope that you feel better soon and that whatever illness you have will be gone asap :) |
| ohthevoices 2008-07-08 ch 2, | abuseAh, No Doubt, excellent choice ;) I love Ev's voice in this as she narrates. It made me laugh a few times, and it makes this more interesting/fun to read (not that it wasn't already, haha). |
| ohthevoices 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseYou've got me hooked already, and nothing's really happened yet. Good job ;) |
| bngzdfnhf 2008-06-29 ch 11, anon. | abuseupdate? |
| Demeterr 2008-06-27 ch 11, | abuseUwah. This is interesting. I look forward to the next chapter. |
| LadyKaurie 2008-06-27 ch 11, | abuseThis is awesome. Update soon please =] x |
| Marigold Winters 2008-06-19 ch 11, | abusePoor Evian, I feel so bad for her now but why is Jorge of all people aginst the change? Wasn't he the one who was all anti- Evy and everything? That and what about Jennifer? Where is she in all of this is Nata still staying with her? Just wondering. Keep it up anyway. I'm not much for encouraging one-liners myself so you'll probably get a few more paragraphs like this from me but keep up the good work. Its very enjoyable to read. Mari x |
| bananamilkshake 2008-06-18 ch 11, | abuseo wow... i love this chapter and the attention to the details! and the part where she just rips the box apart and realizes its the red dress. :) it's wonderful work you've got here! |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-06-18 ch 11, | abuse600th review is mine! all mine!! i just wanted to say, excellent chapter :D loved loved the wag transformation!! haha, well, i'm guilty of not reviewing for... a while, but i still love it anyway! xx |
| Verin 2008-06-18 ch 11, | abuseupdate! just update please! |