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Swabbie 2007-08-16 ch 7, anon.	abuseNifty! I've never ever heard of a striga... it's cool. I love the weirdness of it. I was a bit lost at on point though because the transition from Von thinking Persephone is high to beliving her was so sudden. Either that or I missed a line hehe. Maybe soften the abruptness of that switch?
Swabbie 2007-08-16 ch 12, anon.	abuseThat was amazingly intense! I was quite literally sitting on the edge of my chair (not advisable in a rocking chair, mind you). I love the loose ending. The idea that the story may not have actually ended fits nicely with the idea that Nicki won't be the same anymore. YAYNESS, is really the best word for all that though... :)
Romance-luver222 2007-07-17 ch 12,	abuseO! That was such a good ending to this story! It kind of left on a dun dun da...yet didn't. The story could have a sequal or something where Nicki's desire for blood and power fully return...but then again this stroy can also just end on the note that Nicki will never fully be himself again. Either way...great ending! I really liked the description of Nicki slowly coming out of his coma. How he heard random blurred noises, and then more and more things until he was finally awake. I'm also glad that most of the people, especially the main 3 characters, survived this whole ordeal. The story ends on a pretty nice and happy note. Anyway, again, this was a really great ending to the story, and this was seriously a great story to read. GREAT JOB!
Romance-luver222 2007-07-17 ch 11,	abuseWOW! THAT WAS INTENSE! And now I finally know who the Strigia is! Cool idea with the whole nurse and everything! I really liked the whole thing with Nicki and Von. At first Nicki was very evil and loving his new self while Von tried to figure out a way to say Nicki...but then the tables turn and Nicki almost remembers that he wants Von alive and all that. I just really liked the whole chemistry, dialouge, and feel of that whole part. And how awesome...PERSEPHONE SAVES THE DAY! GO GIRL! I was thinking Von was going to shoot the Strigia as it fed on Persephone, but NO...THE GIRL WAS THE ONE THAT KICKED **! YAYAYAYAYAY! Anyway, this was another great chapter...very intense, i finally got the answer to who was behind all of this, and the whole flow and feel of it was very good. GREAT JOB!
Romance-luver222 2007-07-17 ch 10,	abuseO! Nicki is so evil in this chapter...I LOVE IT! This was a very good...very intese chapter. There were many points when surprising/suspensful things happened that I didn't see coming which was great. There were some obvious gramatic errors or need for a little bit of fixing...but other than that...the chapter was awesome! Very good flow, great suspense and ideas, and just all out awesome. GREAT JOB!
Blossom 2007-07-10 ch 9, anon.	abuseNo! He can't kill Persephone! I love the suspense, but I hope the writers block disappears soon! I want to keep reading! It's awesomely great - the best part is how I can totally picture all the peopele. :)
Romance-luver222 2007-07-02 ch 9,	abuseOMG! DUDE...I'M IN SHOCK! I SERIOUSLY DID NOT SEE THIS COMING! I MEAN PERSEPHONE...A VAMPIRE...WHAT?...I'M SHOCKED! UTERLY SHOCKED...BUT IN A GOOD WAY! Wow...calming down...but wow! Persephone kind of in on it and not knowing it...but then again it doesn't seem like Nicki knows what's happening either. And Von going all psycho with the gun! Wonder if he shoots her...but then again...if he does it probably won't harm her much. Wow...and I mean wow. That was seriously a jaw dropping great chapter. FANTASTIC JOB!
Romance-luver222 2007-07-02 ch 8,	abuseDun Dun Da! Awesome chapter! I'm really liking the Persephone/Von team work thing that's going on. Really liking it, and well, the fact that Nicki is not Mr. Dumbell and knows something is going on. And the cliff hanger...also awesome. I seriously want to know what Persephone found out. I mean obviously it's something to do with that woman and Nicki...but I don't know what...I guess I have to read the next chapter! GREAT JOB!
Laura 2007-06-23 ch 7, anon.	abuseSCORE! That was fantastic! Porphyria/vampirism...AWESOME! I am seriously loving where this story is going! I love it! Your definitely bringing in some great ideas for this story and most of them I don't even see coming (which is saying something cause I usually pick up on things quickly). But yeah, I am seriously loveing this story! You totally have to post another chapter soon for this story! It's fantastic! Okay, I'm calming down now...i'm just really excited over this story! GREAT JOB!
Laura 2007-06-23 ch 6, anon.	abuseWow...did not expect what happened in this chapter to happen. An epidemic? wow...i mean...wow. I just really didn't think about that happening. But it was a cool idea. I'm also surprised so many people are biting the dust. Cooleo. Anywhoozle, this was a very great chapter. I am totally wondering what is happening to all of the students. And why are Persephone and Nicki the only ones to be immune or surving it? Hm...this is very interesting and I must know. O! and by the way...loved the whole Schadenfraude thing...awesome! Anyway, great job! Can't wait to see where this story goes!
Laura 2007-06-23 ch 5, anon.	abuseNice chapter. I liked that there was more speaking between Persephone and Von. It was a nice little chapter. Also nice that Nicki is somewhat better...well at least compared to the last chapter. Can't wait to see where the next chapter goes. Great job!
Laura 2007-06-19 ch 4, anon.	abuseAWE! Poor Nicki! Broken ribs, bruises, stiches...awe! I totally loved the part where Von beat the crap out of Luke and gave him and his groupies a warning...hehehehehehe! Awesome chapter though! I really, really enjoyed it! I'm very curious to see what happens next! Great job!
Laura 2007-06-19 ch 3, anon.	abuseSo...that chapter was awesome! Okay, the lady marmalade thing...excellent! (Especially since my fav movie is Moulin Rouge). Dorian Grey with Jekyl and Hyde...awesome! But Luke doing what he did to Nicki...gr. I hope Nicki's okay. I guess I shall have to see with the next chapter. But, this chapter was seriously great. Nice discription, wonderful flow, great job!
Laura 2007-06-19 ch 2, anon.	abuseO. Nice second chapter! It was a really nice continuation. The whole Nicki/Persephone relationship has developed very well and I can't wait til Persephone and Von actually talk to each other! The halloween party should be awesome! Great work!
Laura 2007-06-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseHeya! I'm finally reviewing! This first chapter was great. Nice introduction and discription, especially once Persephone came into the story. Persephone seems to be a great character. I'm excited to see where this goes! Great work!

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