Normally I cant STAND anything rural, but I decided to try your story. I loved it! The song at the end was a really great touch.

That was chillingly eerie. Great job!
I liked it!
And sorry for the delay, had to read it in whole instead of parts like I usually do.
And this is Chrnoskitty from Neopia, fulfilling her half of the review swap. ^^

Fantastic, and with a wonderfully (well, perhaps not wonderfully, exactly) appropriate title. It wouldn't be so scary if it didn't seem real. So great job!

amazingly eerie. awesome job.