The story's so cute!

love it :)

Well, you have a stunning gift, what else can I say?
Take care, never stop composing.

Perspectives at their best: they're critical, vulnerable, untamed in their natural state, and ever beautiful in their security.
"God knows I couldn’t handle it if I lost you. But instead you snuggle up into my chest and I let you. I lay my head beside yours on the pillow, our fingers linking together, and I know what heaven feels like."

Perfect.

Understated, emotive and well written. I love it!

beautiful i loved it

aww this is so sad *sigh* they both think they're not good enough for each other *sigh*

sorry i'm a hopeless romantic >.

so sad

don't worry ONTO THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!

I enjoy the way you write by the way

this is a really sweet story, but i felt that you could have expanded it a bit more - gone into their relationship and their fights. it's a pity that we don't get to see it and this could be a great storyline if fleshed out.

Wow. You are an amazing writer. I loved the fact that there were no names, and even though there was no dialogue you made it work perfectly. Keep up the good work!

Short and sweet. Very nicely done.

:)

as always, it was wonderful! but what I really liked about this one was how they were so imperfect that they were perfect. it's like... real life, I guess. = ] plus, the no name thing made it to where it could be anyone, everyone. Great job, and keep writing.

AH!! YAY!! This seriously just made my day. =D WONDERFUL STORY!! They're so PERFECT. hehe. We don't know their names, though. I think that's a pretty cool aspect of the one(three)shot.

Beautiful, beautiful.

Truly a great writer. =)

-Mel

Okay, I lied. I'm reviewing this chapter, too. =)

I love how you deliberately made them think basically the same things about each other. I hate when that happens, though. They both love each other, but they won't say it. Or something to that effect.

I'm scared to read the next chapter. I'm afraid they won't end up together. Ah, dammit.

-Mel

**, you're still the most wonderful and deep writer I've ever come across, Autumn. Damn you for that... No, just kidding. heh. This first chapter was so ... moving. I don't know. It has a lot of depth and exposes so many emotions. I love it.

Oh, and you really did update this a gazillion times. hahaha. I opened my Inbox this morning and had 16 of your updates and two actual emails. haha.

Okay, I'm going to go read the next two chapters and then review at the end. =)

-Mel