had a reluctant and regretful tone. nice vocab, keep writing!

wow.
respect.
"keep living without discerning the ambience,
disdaining enormous power of something so minute."

... that's kind of relaxing. Like a good, slow, happy song on the radio on a winter afternoon. Drinking hot chocolate, of course. It's a nice way to tell someone to disregard what other people say and to be true to yourself. I wonder who you were writing to-- yourself or someone else? Either way, it's pretty.

this is simple, yet inspiring. One of those easier said than done, but moves you to at least try to do kind of poems.

'relax, take a sip of your warm chocolate, smile/then keep dreaming, on & on'
o0oh nice lines!

I love this. Excellent job.

Thanks for the reviews!

Rowan.

Wonderful, I love this and I wish that someone had said something like this to me when I was at my lowest, it really does make one smile.

Keep it up.

just < 3
that was so nice!
take a sip of warm chocolate.
keep dreaming.
nice. you are great in poems.

Very pretty, inspiring. The line:
"always look up and close your eyes,
relax, take a sip of your warm chocolate, smile,
then keep dreaming..."
conveys the feeling especially well.