I love this so much, the mention of the canvas and peter pan, screaming, "but does no one remember they die in the end?"

it's so beautiful...

BEAUTIFUL. It makes me want to read "her" poetry, as well, if she were to do so.

The last line didn't so fluidly contradict the rest of the poem, but that was the only ink blot on the white paper.

Beautifully done

Oh wow. That's wonderful. The Peter Pan metaphor is phenomenal. I wish I could write like this. D:

Beautiful, that's all I can say.

It's great...seriously great.I haven't read this poetry this good on this site for a long while. Congradulations.

Nk