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| Circus Caprice 2007-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseSinister, cynical, kind of depressing, almost spiteful, almost hurtful, tongue in cheek, sassy, impetulant, brutal... And very, very good. What you wrote has a certain personality, a life to it. A life which gives the poem a wonderful quality that I enjoyed. Thanks. |
| poemkitten7 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseVery original and nicely written. And I really like the first stanza. Keep writing. =] -Sara |
| The Cowardly Lion 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThat's true. The shepard takes the sheep to be slaughtered. That's interesting. I like this. |