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| BeliefInSquirells 2008-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseHahaha, been there. This is good too. Very differant from your latest story (which i read first) i like it. Favourited. |
| Colie Rae 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. I love the emotion that is growing towards the utter disappointment and humor. |
| lygophobic lullabies 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI love this, it's a unique topic, and it's written well. Great job. |
| renny-chan 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseahahaha. this poem = love. XD renny-chan |
| Militant Poet 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseVery creative poem, and a great idea =D |
| Joshua Amir Franco-Torres-J... 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuse... Try sending motivational emails to yourself. I wrote a letter to myself once... Ehehe. |
| EyesEmphatic 2007-05-01 ch 1, | abusehaha brilliant! I know exactly how you feel! :) |
| Fantasyland 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI feel the same way! I never get any e-mails! Great poem, but I like rhyming ones better. |
| Tahlia Persint 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseGood Job! Poems are my specialty and I luv this one. I EMAIL U ALL THE TIME! |
| sharonsnow 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting subject to write about! |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseHmm. While I can agree with your feelings one-hundred percent (how often has it happened to us all?), I think the way you presented the poem isn't so great. There's no real flow to the poem and because it's very much like a story, it comes off as very clunky, awkward, and poorly written. It would probably work better just as a short little story rather than a poem. While I love the idea, I just think that this needs work to make it smoother and flow nicer. Great idea, though. I've had this happen to me all the time. |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseHaha, funny! That's how I feel exactly! Bet don't worry, when you sign in now it will say (at least) one new message because that will be fictionpress telling you that you have a review (from me!). Awesome job! |