Chocolate syrup and feet--how unusual and original. Nice ending. Everyone got want they wanted and they were happy. Great job on telling the story.

~Twilight Starr~

Priscilla won't be happy about her father's "death". I knew there was some reason why Cort and Curtis's brother's death was mentioned. At least it sounds like Cort will end up with Priscilla. You have a nice way of tying everything together. Terrific work.

~Twilight Starr~

Nice job on description. This story certainly is amusing.

~Twilight Starr~

"I feel sorry for the poor girl, but she needs a husband as much as you need a wife.”--that was a great line. It made me laugh. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

That's great--a cigar band as an engagement ring. I wonder who Sally's most important client is . . . Great chapter. :)

~Twilight Starr~

It's a good thing Walden made an improvement. I wonder what his father will have to say about that improvement.

~Twilight Starr~

Aww, that was a sweet chapter. Terrific dialogue.

~Twilight Starr~

Aww, they made up. That was kind of cute in a violent way. Nice plot.

~Twilight Starr~

A mattress in the back of his truck! You've got to be kidding me. Walden isn't so tough and mighty now. I wonder if he'll be able to get back with Rowena. ""I laughed at his little thingy and puked on him,"--I love this line. Great dialogue.

~Twilight Starr~

Aww, poor Curtis. Great job on creating an interesting and entertaining cast of characters. You certainly write entertaining stories.

~Twilight Starr~

Well, it sure doesn't sound like they're going to have a wonderful night after all. Nice work. I like the dramatics and the story flows well.

~Twilight Starr~

I would have been scared of James if I was the gardener. I wonder how this will turn out.

~Twilight Starr~

I don't think Walden is a scholar or a gentleman so I don't he'll follow through with his word.

~Twilight Starr~

Ah, some matchmaking. I wonder how that goes.

~Twilight Starr~

It sounds like Curtis and Betty are the happiest couple in Norville. I wonder what happens to break that up. Maybe Walden gets involved. Nice work.

Thanks again for all the reviews!

~Twilight Starr~