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Mirror Mirror
Fuffycottoncandygirl
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
Oh, thanks for the correction. The person does not know what the mirror is. -.-'
Shadows in the Fire
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
This story sounds like the person in it is clueless and doesn't know what a mirror is. Also in the line "When I move she does to" you used the wrong kind of 'to'. It should be "too".
-Amber
Paco
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
It's ok, could be better.
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