Aww, so sweet :) And I'm sorry I stole your title for Lovesick Losers, haha. It just popped into my head; I totally forgot that you had one with the same title :O But hey, at least they have the same subject!

Back onto the topic... Amazing poem/lyrics! I've felt the same way a million times... though it was always one-sided. It really captures the emotions and thoughts of the heartbreak-ee (?) I don't think I'm making any sense... but good job! It's fantastic :)

Love how you wrote this. The spaces were perfect with the flow.

this was an amazing poem, i loved how it fit me perfectly too

great job.

pretty- a little cliche theme, but the way you put it was very different and i liked it