This was... INCREDIBLE! Sorry, damn my all caps ways. Anyway, I could to some of the parts in this poem. I liked when you did the "to think, to move, to react, to avenge part. It reminds me of the series that I'm working on to publish, and not on fiction press either. I'm going to an official publisher for this series so I can really get it out amongst the world. Well I didn't type this review about myself, I typed it to say that this was your poetry almost at its best. Keep it up, damn it!!

Hmm.. not exactly creepy.. it's powerful, but it shows emotions that are generally taboo, which makes it all the more wonderful. Not just the fact that the 'persona' wants that guy dead, but that they also want him to suffer and be "Forever condemned to watch those happier"
Also, I really love the list of infinitives there... "To think, to move" etc. I just love that part for some reason :)

Creepy, intense, but it has a certain something. While I don't really like the bolding of the last "move", I think that the repetition has a powerful effect. The ending is sort of creepy too. Intriguing, at least, and that's really good.