 Starleaf 2008-04-11 . chapter 1I like this a lot. I loved the lines "I hog the water, I bathe in the sun / The other flowers don't understand me / But that's me; I'm different / You're just the same as the weeds"
You took the cliche "I'm different than everyone else" attitude, and the whole tulip in a bed of roses sort of thing, and made them unique. |
 Taltush/MeiMei 2007-04-28 . chapter 1Short, but sort of sweet. It's not really substantial, but it was nice to read, if only for a moment. It's not amazing, but it's pleasant. Nice job. |