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Reviews For: The Shadow Prisoner

The Ferrett
2007-08-10
ch 3,
abuseAs I just told you, the second chapter is twisting. Of cours tat is the way it would hapen but still, I haven't done twisting in a while. ::))
The Ferrett
2007-08-10
ch 2,
abuseRat man rocks. It gives a fun way of viewing what happens without giving much away. ::)) and its fun.
Dante The Animelover
2007-06-15
ch 3,
abuseA real nice touch up ^^ Some minior things amiss but overall to me you get five stars over easy. Nice work
Dante The Animelover
2007-06-14
ch 1,
abuseIntresting, well written and very good, espically the rat's POV, keep up the good work ^^
The Flurry of Dancing Flame...
2007-06-11
ch 3,
abuseI loved the first chapter, from the rat's point of view. But it just seems like it was too much of a coincidence that Xun Klahan just happened to end up in the same cell as his uncle. Perhaps it will be explained later, at the moment it seems very unlikely. I look forward to seeing what will happen next. :3
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