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| The Ferrett 2007-08-10 ch 3, | abuseAs I just told you, the second chapter is twisting. Of cours tat is the way it would hapen but still, I haven't done twisting in a while. ::)) |
| The Ferrett 2007-08-10 ch 2, | abuseRat man rocks. It gives a fun way of viewing what happens without giving much away. ::)) and its fun. |
| Dante The Animelover 2007-06-15 ch 3, | abuseA real nice touch up ^^ Some minior things amiss but overall to me you get five stars over easy. Nice work |
| Dante The Animelover 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseIntresting, well written and very good, espically the rat's POV, keep up the good work ^^ |
| The Flurry of Dancing Flame... 2007-06-11 ch 3, | abuseI loved the first chapter, from the rat's point of view. But it just seems like it was too much of a coincidence that Xun Klahan just happened to end up in the same cell as his uncle. Perhaps it will be explained later, at the moment it seems very unlikely. I look forward to seeing what will happen next. :3 |