You forgot a " near the end somewhere. Besides that, it was a dark, disturbing...dazzling (I was going for an alliterative effect) poem. Pretty true. Kind of morbid and creepy.

Nice anaphora with the "Bittersweet words" at the beginning of every sentence...that is anaphora, right? I'm not mixing up my poetry terms, am I?

You win the award for being my favorite reviewer! _ Your reviews always make my day!

Ok, keep writing. And, yeah, I write dark stuff also, so don't feel alone or weird on that subject.

Presence.