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| SpottedStar 2007-05-19 ch 1,  | abuseWow...I really like this one...I can relate...10 |
| The Cowardly Lion 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI read a few of your poems and I really like them...random question...what's you name? Just because your poems remind me of someone I knew and they're really good. |
| charismama 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI found this poem very interesting and refreshing. Regrets are one of the worse type of emotions, and I can understand how you feel. Once again, great work! Keep writing! =) |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseWhile descriptively nice with a good flow, the emotion here doesn't feel like it's yours. Okay, sounds strange, but I mean it. It's not a matter of used ideas, but rather of used feeling. There's beauty, yes, but it feels disconnected, like there's nothing real of yours in it. No solid emotion. Or, at least, not enough. For that kind of a poem, it's actually very good, but I would have wished for just a bit more personality in it. |