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laughing in her sleep
2007-04-29
ch 1,
abuseits really calming in a sad way.
i saw it as if it were in a movie, and she's like going into the fire and people are yelling at her not to,
but like you cant hear them or anything but the pretty, sad music
like it's kinda frightening, but not in a horrible, frantic way.
more serene and sad. (i don't know if you know what i mean, but yeah)

anyway, nice job is kinda what im trying to say haha.

/dani

ps. please R&R
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