Why would you both saying something like that in the summary? Do you really not want people to read it?? Cuz they aren't going to. Think about changing it to get more hits.

Nice story... The only story i've ever seen w Commander Keen in it.

Wow. Someone else besides me has played all of those old games. And wrote a story with them in it. Wow. Anyway, this is a very well written story and I thought it was hilarious. Keep it up!