That's so meaningful...it feels as if you can hear the music...

Wouldn't it be funny if you made that a song? Haha, I'd like to see that!

Anyways, for someone who hasn't written anything in a while, I'd love to read some of your best work!

effective and clear, i easily understood your points.

its beautiful. :)

for someone who claims to be coming out of a writer's block, then i would love to see what it's like when you're in shape. i absolutely love this poem! :)

The thing that I definitely like about this one is that it feels like the music is getting progressively louder. Nice job. ^^

Oh, nice. It wasn't as bad as you're thinking it is. The writer is the piece's worst critic... I liked it ^^

TAD