Aw. That was so cute. I very much do like it. It's funny, because like a long time ago, I read the other one you have, about the hockey dudes (which I also loved, though I can't remember if I reviewed or not... no, I'm sure I did, because I think I added it to my faves and I never add to my faves without reviewing, because some people think that's rude. ANyway.) so then I went to your profile and I found this and I was like, cool! Another one! So then I read it and it was super cute. So. Yeah. Go you, I guess. Woohoo. How do you even pronounce Cyril? I have NEVER heard of that name outside of slash fanfiction. I don't know why some names are so popular in the world of slash; Caden, Oliver, Matt, and Cameron seem to be very common, for some reason. Not too many Jakes, though. It's interesting. Anyway. Good job on this. It's cute.

omg i lovee~ this but i think its good this way...no more chapters needed! XDD i love it btw!

so awesome! i totally love this!

OHH!! This was SO coot! was this a one shot, or are you going to continue on with their being a couple?

That was AWESOME!

please write another chapter!
i am in need of more Derrick and Cyril fluff!

I'm kind of running through my head how Derrick *couldn't* figure out he was in that closet with one of his closest friends. I would think if they were close that Derrick would have recognized Cyril's voice. That said, I otherwise enjoyed your writing and hope you're still doing that.

Either way, it'll be good-standalone or not. Anyways, this was...hehe HOT. I wasn't really into slash stories but not hehe thanks to you, I am! Great job.

XD "I think more runs are needed."

I've always liked the best-friends-turned-lovers stories. :D They're so cute. And believable.

Awesome one-shot. I'd love to read a chapter from Cyril's point of view. :D

I can't remember if I already reviewed or not... if I have, oh well, you just get two reviews. :D

AHAHA the beginning... clean white socks?! The funniness might have been exaggerated because I'm really tired... but that was so funny. XD

lol the first thing I thought when he learns it's Cyril is, "oh **!"

Anyway, very cute. I think you should definately add a second chapter in Cyril's perspective. How did Jacky get him in the closet anyway? (I was going to do something similar to two of my friends, but I couldn't figure out who I'd be able to get both of them in the closet so I had to abandon the idea.)

So, hey...you're an amazing writer. Okay?
This was very cute and the last line was perfect :o]

this is great! I'd love to read another chapter in Cyril's point of view.

I love it.
;D It should be a series.

XD cute! Yes, write that second chapter! now!

Yay. :D This is actually the first ever slash story I have read. Wait, no, I take that back. The first slash story on *fictionpress* that I have ever read. The other was actually published. But that is so not the point.

The point is, I thought it was really, really good. You could really get into Derrick's place, mentally. If that makes sense. I do think that it would be better as a one shot, simply because you left it off at such a good point. But another one from Cyril's point of view would also rock. :D

Is your name by any chance Kail? I know that seems like a really weird question, but your username being Kailum and stuff...yeah. xD I just like that name. It would make a really great CIA agent name.

Loves,
Sally :D