Success. The dream of pure love. That's a decent love poem. Simple, but decent. It also tells me that sometimes people can get with the wrong individual, however thwy also can discover the right pwrson at the right time (hell if I should know my own advice on love, I'm not an expert, lol).

I like it. I'm not that into the romance thing but this is good :D

told like a story, it's simple and to the point. it's a poem without being too poetic :)

I felt like changing my penname. Like it, like it? TOO BAD. MWuahaha. No, I don't know what to say 'cause I'm not a big fan of love. As Nikki would say, I'm not interested in the making of Max and Tina and all that. Ha ha.I don't know, it's kind of long. I might switch back to the VSS after a few days.She had another man on the side. *Looks over* All I've got is an empty cup of coffee. How pathetic. I came to review you and be boring and drank my coffee. Grr.