oh wow. *-* that ending was completely unexpected, but I do love it, really really truly. OHMIGOSH I just wish I could stop crying rofl xDD happy tears !! XD Great writing, I laughed so much & cried and laughed and freaked out and really really laughed. The Statue & the notes to self, were truly brilliant.
I'm looking forward to reading your other writings, amazing, truly.
:)

Wow! It ended totaly different then anything i expected. I'm not a big fan of previews of lives thirty years latter or whatever, but i thought you did a good job with it. I love Luke's habbit of writing notes to himself verry endearing, though he was one of the most anoying charecters i have ever met! okay not realy, but he really needs a backbone. Matt's habit of swearing in practicaly every sentence that comes out of his mouth ticked me off. I hate people like that! The story was really good though and I enjoyed reading it!

Boy love and all the drama it entails...I love the smell of angst in the morn-well the night as the case my be here. I liked it. It was pretty realistic.

Hi!

Just started reading your story. Yours is pretty good and quite humorous. I really like it. I'm looking forward to more of your stories. My review follows in the next paragraph.

I say that so far you've been doing good in spicing up the story. Though you said you're not happy about it. What did you find that makes you unhappy with the story?

AWW wow. Ahaha This was so good, I finished it all in one day xDD

Omg when he started running again, my heart swelled. *sniff sniff* I'm such a romantic. xD I always want the best for all the characters xD

xD Yay! Kiss scene~ finally lol

Aww! What a cute ending! I love Matt and Luke so far, but I have to say, Matt is so much more interesting to read in his p.o.v. xD

Ahahahahaha! Lovely ending for this chapter. Made me laugh out loud xD

I read the first chapter and am absolutely in love with it! Usually I hate reading from one character's p.o.v to another, but, wow, you made it work! Grats grats! I can see how interesting this will be~ xD

Oh my gawd i had tears in my eyes best ending ever even with all the sadness -bawls- why is it over?

Can guys have pms I think thats what luke's going through and it's so cute. looking forward to reading the rest. :)

Im just saying that was amazing (tears in eyes) I loved the way you wrote it... i was about to kill you though when you made Luke drive away and Matt just sit there watching. I was going to myself 'its ok Luke will jump out of the car and run to Matt, fairytale ending *blah blah*'
But atleast they got together in the end XD
So thx!

I seriously dont know how to tell u how much ur story affected me my familiy thought there was something wrong bc i kept bursting into tears u r a wonderful writer and i just wanted to tell u ur story touched me in a way i couldnt explain so THANK U!

Great story i loved it so very frustrating though i must admit but i really really loved it.