I love this one! LOVELOVELOVE!

o vrey dark and depressing but nicely done.

I really like this, how the first three lines rhyme and then you break it in the end where you use brackets. It's true for a lot of people, I think.

really thought-provoking

Erm. Don't really have the words...but I like it. And the shape of the poem reminds me of a gun. Accident?

Wow i love the last couple of lines, kinda true nowadays isn't it?

Beautiful. In a raw kind of way. Great work.

Hey!

Ouch. Yeah, I agree. And I'm one of the girls who swore she'd NEVER say I love you (notice I spell it L-O-V-E, L-U-V is NOT the same thing, at least not in my mind [which, I admit, isn't exactly...normal]), unless I really meant it. But I did it, just once, years back despite my promise. So, that last line definitely hurt.

Luv ya,
Tashi :)

ohh, those last lines hurt. because i know it's true. and i'm guilty. this is so lovely.