So good..just like I knew it would be.

The sonnet's not half bad either :P
Just kidding.


Maybe you should continue this one.
Think about it :]

oh gosh arienne! i love it so much. you're so talented at this kind of thing. keep it going. i love stories like this one!

Vicodin... that's what House takes. But to judge by the show, you can't die by taking that, even half a bottle in one shot, because Vicodin is some sort of painkiller, aspirin. Well, unless you take it with alcohol but it doesn't look like Roman had that.

About Roman's little sister... I'm bipolar, but it doesn't really affect the people around me. Bipolarity is just a form of depression that comes and goes. And lithium dibroide controls it pretty well. But you said extremely bipolar... anyway.

This is still an excellent piece of work. It deals with a lot of themes, like the pressure we put on kids who are first to stay first. I didn't really see the ending coming. I thought he was going to do something like set fire to the school, not commit suicide. If you don't mind me saying so, the beginning and resume reminded me of Child's Play.

This is certainly going in the favorites.

wow
this is amazing!
no joke
the best one you've written so far!
that sonnet was great!

im seriously like in awe!
it was great
i love it!

really well done. i liked how it played out and hope you continue with this.

really good but are you going to write how everyone deals with his death especially the teacher. it's really good and i would love to read more like it. message me if you do decide to add more