|Reviews for Glass Box|
| angie hofer 9/11/12 . chapter 1
I love it. It tells a story and it isn't just rambling.
| SpyTrap 12/10/03 . chapter 1
"My eyes stare out, saddened." Saddened by what, exactly?
"Free me... this place." I'm having a difficult time picturing someone saying that. Obviously, it's quite metaphorical, but IMO it disrupts the flow of the poem when I struggle to picture someone actually speaking those words.
"Pennaceous wings." Isn't that a bit redundant? Dunno. Maybe not.
I didn't think it was depressing at all- quite the opposite, in fact. I liked it.
| one-and-da-same 11/27/03 . chapter 1
cool! very strong imagry or whatever you call it. I absolutely LOVE this poem, it's wonderful. Keep up the good work.
| Katterree Fengari 5/14/02 . chapter 1
yes, but not depressing enough, I was trying to find a poem called "I live in a box" but this is quite similar, good poem
| soil 3/23/01 . chapter 1
!wow! this is Really cool
| poetrysdeadremarks 3/22/01 . chapter 1