I don't care, I love fluff! Poor Kyran... he needs to be honest with elyse and tell her what's going on. There has to be a way they can be together.

A sap, maybe, but also a good writer. Besides, I like all that mushy gushy stuff. I love this story, please update soon!

Good chapter, thanks for updating so soon.

oh wow... that is so cute...i can't wait to read the rest of the story...D

I really love this story. How can I not? It's about marmaids and marmans! My favorite disney movie is The Little Mermaid and so, it seems logical that I would be drawn to this story. Please update soon!

UPDATE!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Aryawolf.

PS: Is Elyse royalty?

Like Kyran? That's what I'm guessibg..Or it could be the exact opoosite..

Keep it in Romance.:D It was nice how you well you used the third person... but somehow I feel that the feelings would be more intense with the first person. Well that's just me. It was a great chapter anyways. Can't wait for chapter 3! I'm hoping and expecting there'd be a twist there.

This is good, though a little short...so update quickly, i want to knwo the secret, and what's going to happen with the pearls!

Oh... you've gotten my attention!

First of all, I love your description. It's not too few, but it's not too much that it makes me think, "OK! I GET IT, THE CAR IS BLUE!"... you know what I mean. Though a little bit of physical descrptions would be nice, just to give us a small idea of what they look like.

And he dived into the water? A ten year old boy?

Is this.. some.. magical, important event?

Or did he just want to take a swim?

Hahaha... well, definiteyl keep writing! :D

Very interesting start! I liked the way you built up the two characters' friendship. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.:)