|Reviews for Three Pearls|
| euphorictragedy 6/8/07 . chapter 4
I don't care, I love fluff! Poor Kyran... he needs to be honest with elyse and tell her what's going on. There has to be a way they can be together.
| euphorictragedy 5/21/07 . chapter 3
A sap, maybe, but also a good writer. Besides, I like all that mushy gushy stuff. I love this story, please update soon!
| aryawolf13 5/20/07 . chapter 3
Good chapter, thanks for updating so soon.
| kim2010 5/20/07 . chapter 3
oh wow... that is so cute...i can't wait to read the rest of the story...D
| euphorictragedy 5/9/07 . chapter 2
I really love this story. How can I not? It's about marmaids and marmans! My favorite disney movie is The Little Mermaid and so, it seems logical that I would be drawn to this story. Please update soon!
| aryawolf13 5/8/07 . chapter 1
I cant wait for the next chapter!
PS: Is Elyse royalty?
Like Kyran? That's what I'm guessibg..Or it could be the exact opoosite..
| President 5/7/07 . chapter 2
Keep it in Romance.:D It was nice how you well you used the third person... but somehow I feel that the feelings would be more intense with the first person. Well that's just me. It was a great chapter anyways. Can't wait for chapter 3! I'm hoping and expecting there'd be a twist there.
| amber-skies 4/30/07 . chapter 1
This is good, though a little short...so update quickly, i want to knwo the secret, and what's going to happen with the pearls!
| akb-inactive 4/30/07 . chapter 1
Oh... you've gotten my attention!
First of all, I love your description. It's not too few, but it's not too much that it makes me think, "OK! I GET IT, THE CAR IS BLUE!"... you know what I mean. Though a little bit of physical descrptions would be nice, just to give us a small idea of what they look like.
And he dived into the water? A ten year old boy?
Is this.. some.. magical, important event?
Or did he just want to take a swim?
Hahaha... well, definiteyl keep writing! :D
| President 4/30/07 . chapter 1
Very interesting start! I liked the way you built up the two characters' friendship. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.:)