MAn, I was a lite confused when I first read the prologue, but then after reading the first chapter, I understood it. Please update soon. >_

Nice job done! Congrats! haha. :D hehe, this chapter's certainly longer :P sorry if I've offended u previously :D but u have to know that we readers aren't patient when it comes to good stories. XD Anyway, good luck to u on working on piper's!

I was POSITIVE I reviewed the first chapter but apparently I didn't, and for that I apologize since I did read it. I must say that I personally didn't expect George to be a girl. Huh- go figure. :) I enjoyed this chapter, and I'm glad you enjoyed writing it; writing should be fun.

Well of course I was confused because you didn't say George was a girl and I assumed that she was a boy because, 'George,' is a predominantly male name. Maybe you should just cut the Prologue off because all it does is confuse people and is like one huge summary. That isn't what a Prologue is supposed to be.


-JW`chan ^-^

Oh, so George is a GIRL! Haha, after reading the first chapter I had the impression that George was a guy and that this second chapter was being told in Melissa's Point of View. Hahaha, I'm liking this story already. Poor Georgie doesn't know what's about to hit her. *giggles* I so cannot wait for chapter 3!

Hahaha... I thought George was a guy... That took me by surprise... And I have a guess who Melissa likes. Oh boy, things are sure heating up... =) Update soon!

Nicely done!I know it's a prologue, so I can't complain that it's short...sigh... Looking forward to the pentagon love! lol. Keep it up! Oh ya... what bout other stories?? u didn't update Piper and the doll...been looking forward to it...XD.

Good so far... Ya know it also would make the situation worse if your main character had a little sister who happened to fall for the 3 popular dudes. Lol! There's so much chaos possible from that...


-JW`chan ^-^

Ha, I kinda feel sorry for that poor dude who got dragged into this, HA!